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I really like this. Its different then alot of portraits.
the lighting is good--and composition. usually-i prefer-that the body isn't cut off...like the hand on the left and the right leg extended...but its ok here... h
what i personally think can make this really more effective---is to find a way to remove the serge protector and wires.
either via post processing or redoing the shot.
its sort of interferes as well as that radiator on the far right....
u can add a texture layered over this and just darken those areas...trying to keep that light..
also--i cant help but wonder how it would look in black and white.
also..i think straightening it out would benefit the composition.
I think it is a unique portrait and worth investing time to perfect.
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:iconrogasaki:
they haunt in my dreams, but under the desk :O_o:

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"the only reason we die is because we accept it as an inevitability"
:iconbarrel-maker:
strong, and eerie.
excellent photo.
:iconmorwen1337:
wow, the veins in her legs :wow: beautiful photo.
:iconpavelverner:
this is beautiful Lisa, very well done

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